There were no real gags in here and mostly just brought up cliche things for the fact that they were cliche and that's not a joke. There was no making fun of the cliche things so it just felt lazy and like there was little to no effort put in to the writing so I couldn't even find myself enjoying the animation. Unfortunately, I'm really gonna have to give this a low rating.
With how short part 1 is I feel like this definitely didn't need to be a 2 parter but other than that, it was pretty decent.
There will be a part 2. It will be much longer. About 2 minutes. :) Its coming hopefully tomorrow. :)
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