There were no real gags in here and mostly just brought up cliche things for the fact that they were cliche and that's not a joke. There was no making fun of the cliche things so it just felt lazy and like there was little to no effort put in to the writing so I couldn't even find myself enjoying the animation. Unfortunately, I'm really gonna have to give this a low rating.
With how short part 1 is I feel like this definitely didn't need to be a 2 parter but other than that, it was pretty decent.
There will be a part 2. It will be much longer. About 2 minutes. :) Its coming hopefully tomorrow. :)
You definitely need to turn up your mix. I can hardly hear you. When you do that, I'd LOVE to hear more.
Pretty decent man. You have the same problem I had before and that is you are kinda whispering into the mic rather than speaking and showing off your voice. Another smart thing to do is to learn how to cancel out the background noise. It's really simple if you use a decent program. Good luck out there man.
Thanks Man, And I don't whisper, trust me my neighbors have let me know lol. But if I add too much decibal boost the white noise pops up since I am using a sub-par microphone. My blue yeti broke. :/ But I took a lot of the white noise out with Audacity, granted I could have boosted and cleaned better. I was trying to keep it very Raw at the same time. In the same sense thank you for the criticism and kind words. :D
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